For my second pitch, I made some minor adjustments to my original pitch as from the comments, I realized that I had not been clear on whether or not this would be a free app. This seemed to be the only real concern regarding my idea other than just a general possibility of existing competition, which makes sense and I know could be a potential issue if I were to go forward with this app. I greatly appreciated the feedback and did not feel like anyone "missed the mark" in their analysis!
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Wow, I found your opportunity to be very interesting! I had never thought of that idea before, but after hearing about your opportunity, I think it would be really good. Having an app that would have extended information for the busses would be fantastic! You and I have similar opportunities in that we both thought out of the box with our opportunities. In all, great job on your post and I would love to see this idea implemented! Feel free to check out my blog post for this assignment!
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Hi Marissa!
ReplyDeleteI have too struggled with the bus system. I am usually stressed that I will not be able to make it somewhere on time because the bus will not arrive on time or does not have any open seats or room for more passengers. I think this app is a great idea for college students. I would definitely eleminate unneeded stress. How much would you charge for the app? That is my only concern because I believe money is a stress as well for most college students. Great concept idea! Feel free to check out my blog post: http://rachelecarter.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Marissa!
ReplyDeleteLiked your pitch and think you got a solid idea to go with your pitch. One this I would recommend is to work on your pauses. If you pause in your talking make sure it is either for people to take in the information presented or to put emphasis on the previous spoken sentence. Also If you dress professionally it really boosts the way you talk without you even thinking about it! I would recommend it but besides that I think you did a good job of presenting and thought it was a pretty interesting idea.
You should check mine out as well!
http://enriqueteie.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html
Hey Marissa!
ReplyDeleteLiked your pitch and think you got a solid idea to go with your pitch. One this I would recommend is to work on your pauses. If you pause in your talking make sure it is either for people to take in the information presented or to put emphasis on the previous spoken sentence. Also If you dress professionally it really boosts the way you talk without you even thinking about it! I would recommend it but besides that I think you did a good job of presenting and thought it was a pretty interesting idea.
You should check mine out as well!
http://enriqueteie.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html